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Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe, whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style were influential on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from his own.
were influential on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from
influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from
was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, was also inspirational to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was different significantly in comparison to
was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, who included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, the music of whom differed significantly when compared to
were an influence on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was significantly different from that of
1) 能用动词表达的,就尽量不要用动名词和形容词来表达
2) 限定性从句和非限定性从句: 限定性定语从句对先行词起限制、确定作用,与先行词有着不可分割的联系,它的前面通常没有逗号;非限定性定语从句与它的先行词之间只有比较松散的关系,通常用逗号将它与主句隔开
(A) were influential不如influenced简洁,also an inspiration不如inspired简洁;that included应该用
which或者who代替,改为非限定从句
1、repertory and vocal style主谓一致杀CD
2、AEredundancy，AC中that前有逗号，限制性定语从句被割裂，错误
ACE，BM was an inspiration，错误
D，主谓不一致，三者并列应该用复数
his own=his music
from that of him = from his own
错选E，from that of him = from his own, 选项重复了，此外，能用动词表达的,就尽量不要用动名词和形容词来表达。A选项，that定从是限制性定语从句，前面一般无逗号。正确B
动词是最直接的
B 其实也不好，influenced是whose引导的定语从句的谓语，inspired如果跟influenced并列则主句没有谓语动词，所以只能理解成inspired是主句的谓语。这个答案很牵强。但是相比其他选项只能选它了
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"repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style" + 複數動詞，(a)(e) eliminated
(a)(b) 比較，that 只引導限定，(a) eliminated
(b)(e) 比較，from that of him = from his own, (e) eliminated
注意BE的前半部分，显然这里需要表达动词，动词更直接
repertory，views……and vocal style 是三个并列名词
views是名词，不作动词
动词与形容词同时存在时候，优先选动词
E: - "That of his own" is redundant (and incorrect, because it literally means "Bill Monroe's music's music").
From Ron
除非有插入语（前后都有逗号，否则that只能紧跟被修饰词做限制性定语，前面不能加逗号
vocal style和musician都是influence和inspire的动作发出者，而非影响和激励本身。这种抽象名词很少会是一个东西。
his own=his music=that of him 所以e错
repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style三者并列，主句谓语动词inspire
influential on不优
E that of his own表示music of his music不合逻辑
B选项的谓语动词是inspired
A BM这个人本身是一个鼓舞，语义不对，that只引导限制性
B 正确
C 主谓不一致，that同A
D 主谓不一致 the music of whom wordy
E 是一个影响 是一个鼓舞 错 that of 无指代