Frederick Winslow Taylor, a machinist and engineer who worked in the early twentieth century, believed that the productivity of a job could be improved if one were to separate the components of a task into its individual motions and found the best way to perform each motion, then redesign the job so that each motion could be done as efficiently as possible.
if one were to separate the components of a task into its individual motions and found the best way to perform each motion, then redesign
if one separated the components of a task into individual motions, found the best way to perform the motions, and then redesigning
if the components of a task were separated into individual motions, finding the best way of performing the motions, and then redesigned
by separating the components of a task into individual motions, finding the best way to perform each motion, and then redesigning
by separating the components of a task into individual motions, finding the best way of performing each motion, then redesign
错误点:固定搭配way to do; redesigh的平行对象【语义!】
A:若平行需改为"...were to separate ... and (to) find..."
此句的平行结构是:separating..., finding..., and then redesigning...
AB :one指代不清不能作为绝对错误 。
更正:way to do/doing sth. way of doing sth. 这几个搭配意思差不多,无大差别,还是要从平行考虑。
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考的是Parallelism