Mary Wollstonecraft's A Vindication of the Rights of Woman (1792) was unprecedented in its first hand accounts of the indignities suffered by women and because it was eloquent and passionate in exposing and criticizing these indignities.
and because it was eloquent and passionate in exposing and criticizing
and in that it was eloquent and passionate when exposing and criticizing
as well as the eloquence and passion it had in exposing and criticizing
and in the eloquence and passion with which it exposed and criticized
but also its eloquent and passionate exposure and criticism of
题目分析:
略。
选项分析:
A选项:本题的意思是:一个书在两方面是史无前例的,一个是在它是第一份手稿上,一个是在它是一种雄心和激情这方面上。因此,两者应该保证在语法上的对等。应将原因状语从句because it was eloquent and passionate in exposing and criticizing these indignities改为和in its first hand accounts平行的in the eloquence and passion。
B选项:本选项错误同选项A。in that没有问题,表示原因,和because基本意思相同。
C选项:as well as是副词而不是连词,因此其不能连接并列的两个对象,必须改为and。
D选项:Correct. 本选项在语法和逻辑上均是正确的。
E选项:整个选项的核心词和其它选项均不相同。本选项中的eloquent和passionate均是形容词,此两者是exposure和criticism的定语。在逻辑上,这本书史无前例的地方应该是“雄辩和激情”,不应该仅仅是一种曝光(曝光对女性的歧视这件事肯定早有过,不能说这本书就是因此而史无前例的)。另外,本选项在措辞方面有问题,“是第一份手稿”和“是曝光及批判”这两者之间没有转折的关系,应把but改为and。
d看见which恍惚了就排除了,这个是with which引导的定语从句
想问一下as well as 后面连接的是两个名词 为什么不行呢
不懂为什么as well as不行
一个书在两方面是史无前例的,一个是在它是第一份手稿上,一个是在它是一种雄心和激情这方面上。因此,两者应该保证在语法上的对等。应将原因状语从句because it was eloquent and passionate in exposing and criticizing these indignities改为和in its first hand accounts平行的in the eloquence and passion。
考平行,D是对in its first hand accounts的最佳平行
in that表示因为,与because语意类似。但in that只放在句中作状语连接词,如:They are different books in that one is about Verbal the other about Math.
that/when/where可以做从属连词,链接不定式/分词/句子等做状语,如:The rats live longer when fed a better diet.
A,in sth表示在某事上是没有先例的,跟because语意上无法平行。
B,在一手的表述上和在某件事情上没有先例,语意上没有做到最优平行
C,as well as表示从属的依附关系,弱于and并列关系。有and的情况下,优选and
D,ok
E,but表并列时,至少还要一个not,否则只能表转折
史无前例的两个方面而不是两个原因
平行结构,.... was unprecedented in ....and in....... ,with which引导定语从句,which指代eloquent和passionate
D的with which it exposed and criticized是什么成分啊?
定语从句。但凡有which的,都是定语从句。
D的which作定语从句的成分的话, 还原后面的句子就是it exposed and criticized these indignities。 那这个which在这个定语从句里做什么位置啊?
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句子结构:.... was unprecedented in ....and in...
平行结构。看懂句子结构就不会有什么问题
A和B中,and的后面是原因状语从句,而左边没有,这也是一种错误吧
it 指代 A Vindication of the Rights of Woman 。
NICE
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