In the United States, while the number of foreign-born residents and their children is higher than ever, the percentage of the population they represent is not; in 1910 this group made up 35 percent of the population when compared to 20 percent in 2000.
population when compared to 20 percent in 2000
population as compared to 2000, when it was 20 percent
population, comparing it with 20 percent in 2000
population, unlike 2000, with 20 percent
population, compared with 20 percent in 2000
A,"when compared to 20 percent in 2000"是伴随状语,主语是this group.而显然1910年的group无法构成2000年的比例。语义不正确。
E,compared with 20 percent in 2000是定语,修饰35 percent of the population.
第一轮删去:语法层级
A: when状语从句的省略问题:当主从主语一致时,从句主语省略;即暗含when this group is compared to,然而逻辑上应是35%和20%比,不是this group 和20%比 ❌
c:问题同a “svo,doing”需要考虑逻辑主语
d:比较对象不对等
第二轮比较 b和e:歧义/冗长精简层级
b:it指代不明晰,有歧义
相比起来,e明显更好
compared with -- “svo,done”修饰最近名词,即35%,比较对象可比, 且句子表达清晰简介
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E选项compared with 20 percent in 2000是定语,修饰35 percent of the population.
比较对象是两个不同的比例。
A选项"when compared to 20 percent in 2000"是伴随状语,主语是this group.而显然1910年的group无法构成2000年的比例。语义不正确。
E选项compared with 20 percent in 2000是定语,修饰35 percent of the population.
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A、B、C里compare都是 伴随,主语是this group表示了同一群人(即都是1910年出生的那些人),不合理
D的比较对象不对
E是定语成分,正确
连词+v-ing/v-ed作伴随,ABC伴随状语,主语是group,group不能与百分比或是年份比较,排除
D,比较对象有误
E correct
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A、B、C里compare都是 伴随,主语是this group表示了同一群人(即都是1910年出生的那些人),把同一群人和百分比比较,不合理
D unlike比较对象不对
E是定语成分,正确
E定语?
插入语,非限定性,修饰前面的名词
Awhen引导的是状语状语状语!!!!!
E定语修饰population
注意此题。
the "when" here kills this answer choice.
remember that you have to read very literally.
if you read the "when" literally, then you'd be saying that the 1910 immigrant group made up 35% of the population WHEN THEY WERE COMPARED to 20 percent (of something we haven't even specified) in 2000. of course, this makes no literal sense whatsoever.
小姐姐,我看了ron的解释 还是搞不懂A和E的意思区别在哪里 ,你能指点一下吗
就是 说 当和Y比较,X........... 这个意思是有错误的,因为你并不是只有在当和Y比较的时候,X才怎样。X怎样和Y没有关系。
多读几遍哈 可能有点绕
好的,我慢慢的来理解 ,谢谢啦
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