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题库 / Prep2007E2-SC-141
Lenders and building managers in the southwestern section of the city report that because of the rental market in the area being renewed, as well as the willingness of the banks to lend money being increased, apartment buildings are being rehabilitated at a pace unseen for a decade.
of the rental market in the area being renewed, as well as the willingness of the banks to lend money being increased
of the renewed rental market in the area, as well as the willingness of banks to lend money increasing
of the renewed rental market in the area and the increased willingness of banks to lend money
the rental market in the area renewed and the willingness of banks to lend money increased, therefore
the rental market in the area was being renewed and banks were increasingly willing to lend money, so
you also can't say "because [sentence], therefore [sentence]".
you have 2 viable options:
(1) "because [sentence], [sentence]" (or "because of [noun/phrase], [sentence]")
(2) "[sentence]; therefore, [sentence]" -- note that you CANNOT write "(sentence), therefore (sentence)". placing "therefore" after a comma is strictly british usage.
because/so是连词，不能同时使用；therefore是副词，语法上可以和because同时使用。D错在renewed没有用被动式
renew，翻新，复兴，东西自己不会翻新，是人使它翻新，D要用被动式；
increase通常用主动，the price increase by 2%;
be increased是形容词，表示增加的。The rainfall is increased across South America
动词的主被动关系需要抓准！！！renew在这里是被动
because是从属连词，therefore是副词，语法上可以，但语意冗余。
as well as 暗示强调前者，此处应为chunbinglie
这都错 看句子总是看不全
DE therefore, so多余
C不是run-on，因为：
if the sentence starts with the words resembling one of the following --
"my friend said that"
"studies have shown that"
"people believe that"
"companies have found that"
etc.
-- then these words DO NOT affect the grammar of the rest of the sentence AT ALL.
you can think of these constructions as "warm-ups". if you remove these constructions, the grammar of the entire remaining portion will be EXACTLY the same.