Researchers agreed that the study of new treatments for heart attack patients was extremely important but more research was needed to determine that balloon angioplasty preceded with ultrasound was or was not any better for heart attack patients than the balloon procedure by itself.
more research was needed to determine that balloon angioplasty preceded with ultrasound was or was not any better for heart attack patients than
more research was needed for determining whether or not balloon angioplasty preceded by ultrasound is any better for heart attack patients than is
that more research was needed to determine whether balloon angioplasty preceded by ultrasound is any better for heart attack patients than
that more research was needed to determine that balloon angioplasty preceded with ultrasound was any better for heart attack patients than
that more research was needed for determining that balloon angioplasty preceded by ultrasound is or is not any better for heart attack patients than is
题目分析:
略。
选项分析:
A选项:过去分词短语preceded with ultrasound应改为preceded by ultrasound。这是因为,过去分词表被动,而被动语态规定,be done by A中的A才是do在逻辑上的主语。由于超声波是在逻辑上发出precede这个动作的主语,所以应该用介词by。
B选项:介词短语for determining应改为不定式短语to determine,这点考查了不定式和ing的区别,用之于本题,for determining是need的宾语补足语,因此应有need的约束力决定。显然地,need的约束力较强,应该用不定式短语做宾语的补足语。
C选项:Correct. 本选项在语法和逻辑上均是正确的。
D选项:preceded with错误同选项(A);determine的内容发生在主句agree之后,所以应该用agree向后推移的时态:一般现在时is,而不能用一般过去时was。
E选项:介词短语for determining应改为不定式短语to determine错误同选项(B)。
Researchers agreed【that】 the study of new treatments for heart attack patients was extremely important but 【that】more research was needed to determine 【whether 】balloon angioplasty preceded by ultrasound is any better for heart attack patients than the balloon procedure by itself.
研究人员一致认为,对心脏病发作患者的新治疗方法的研究非常重要,但需要更多的研究来确定超声之前的球囊血管成形术是否比球囊手术本身对心脏病发作患者更好。
agree that…but that…,宾语从句的平行that不能省,使句子更加清晰
whether or not的使用:
在引导宾从的时候只能够用whether,而不能加or not,否则累赘;
在引导状从的时候必须加上or not,即whether or not。
determine的内容如果现在还未最终决定下来时, is用现在时成立
"错选B 没发现whether or not是重复的
determine that 错误 改变了原意 原文中determine后面的事情还不确定 排除ADE
C没选 主要是觉得少了助动词is 但是在这句话中少了is不会引起歧义。另外是觉得主语research不能发出to do的动作,但是在被动语态中这一点是例外。"
that省不省略都是一个意思,都可以
ps. A third "split" that could have guided your process of eliminate was the "more research" v. "that more research." Since the non-underlined portion of the sentence states "researchers agreed that," a second "that" is needed to maintain proper parallelism.
曼哈顿官方:The first "split" I noticed was "preceded by" v. "preceded with." As one thing is preceded by another, eliminate choices A and D. The second "split" I noticed was "needed for determining" v. "needed to determine." Idiomatically, needed to determine is correct. Eliminate B and E. The best answer is C.
C的确是后半句应该用was好于is,但是D项that 不对,和原句语意不符。语意/语法优先于时态。
d选项改变了句子意思,就是承认了第一种方法更优,而实际上uncertain
"whether or not" is almost always considered redundant on GMAT.
B is wrong because "is" is redundant
d选项解释多注意
determine的内容发生在主句agree之后,所以应该用agree向后推移的时态:一般现在时is,而不能用一般过去时was。
preceded by。。
preceded by
whether/that: Here we need to check/determine something. SO we need to use whether[or not], whereas in D it uses THAT showing that the result(the part after that) WAS true and now more research is needed to prove/reprove/verify its authenticity. Does this makes sense,meaning-wise?
c 的is的时态没有问题吗??整句话不是都处于过去式中吗?
C中不补出is不会感觉是patents和balloon procedure在比较嘛?
同意同意同意同意!!!求问啊 这种SVO+than + noun 的不都是要补出助词来避免歧义的么!!
这里是不需要的,因为balloon angioplasty preceded by ultrasound与balloon procedure by itself平行,很明显是这两个对比。
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1)is/was: u feel was is correct because you are looking at verb tense consistency. But u need to check the meaning also. In this statement, it just checks " whether X is any better[or not] "
2)whether/that: Here we need to check/determine something. SO we need to use whether[or not], whereas in D it uses THAT showing that the result(the part after that) WAS true and now more research is needed to prove/reprove/verify its authenticity. Does this makes sense,meaning-wise?
这个题难道不应该还有 “平行” 的知识点吗?因为最后有个 “than”, than 前后句应该平行
理解了句意后感觉determine后一定要出现whether这个词
b选项or not多余
c中前面的that一开始也被我拿来判断了…-。-
1,也就是说是否需要加that,在这个题目看来,既不是考点,也不具有逻辑意思上的错误。
2,总感觉balloon angioplasty 后面跟的preceded是错误的,因为未划线部分是balloon procedure,所以认为应该是balloon angioplasty proceeded,进行,进展的意思,这个时候用by似乎就可以了。而preceded的意思是先于....之前......用by的话,逻辑意思上不搭调啊.
1. 完全正确。千万不能马后炮的认为这个that需要添加。因为,在考题中,省略这个that,和不省略这个that都很常见,绝对不是错误。
2. 这是个很好的问题。其实不是写错了,是没划线部分省略了这个preceded。原句应该是:
whether balloon angioplasty preceded by ultrasound is any better for heart attack patients than the balloon procedure preceded by itself
itself的指代是?感谢老师
balloon procedure呀~意思用超声波的气囊血管成形术和普通的气囊血管成形术的比较。
我再多读几遍>.
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