In 1981 children in the United States spent an average of slightly less than two and a half hours a week doing household chores; by 1997 they had spent nearly six hours a week.
chores; by 1997 they had spent nearly six hours a week.
chores; by 1997 that figure had grown to nearly six hours a week.
chores, whereas nearly six hours a week were spent in 1997.
chores, compared with a figure of nearly six hours a week in 1997.
chores, that figure growing to nearly six hours a week in 1997.
题目分析:
本题的关键,在于对实物代词they的理解。
选项分析:
选项A:本选项在语法上没有问题。但是仔细观察在划线部分出现了代词they,其指代对象为出现过的名词children。本选项按照字面意思翻译为:
在1981年,美国的小孩平均每周花两个半小时去做家务劳动,但是在1997年,他们会花6个小时做家务劳动。
由于they是实物指代,也就是指代前面出现过的那个名词,所以译文中的“他们”指的在1981年出现过的那些小孩。这是不正确的,假如在1981年,小孩们是5岁,那么到了1997年,这些小孩变成了21岁,即,they指代这些21岁的“小孩”。显然地,本题想比较的是两个年份小孩的情况,而不是同一群小孩在两个年份的区别。当然,也可以改为:
by 1997 children had spent nearly six hours a week.
选项B:Correct. 本选项在语法和逻辑上均是正确的。
选项C:whereas身后是被动句,其缺少真正的执行者。单纯读划线部分,我们只能知道有将近六个小时被花费了,至于究竟是谁花费了这六个小时,我们不得而知,自然本选项就无法和In 1981 children in the United States spent an average of slightly less than two and a half hours a week doing household chores形成对比(whereas)关系。
选项D:compared with a figure of nearly six hours a week in 1997是一个过去分词短语,它只能就近修饰身前的household chores。在逻辑上,和数据比的,不能是家务劳动。
选项E:本选项是独立主格结构。依据图形背景原则,若本选项正确,则grow这个动作必然在时间上长于主句的spend动作。但在本题中,两个动作处于两个年份,无法判定谁持续的时间长于谁,因此,只能用分号两个独立的句子。
they指代的是原来那批孩子,但是其实主体已经不是那批孩子了,是另外一批了,所以they错误。
A:Since "spend nearly six hours a week", like ""perform well", doesn't represent a fundamental change of state or indicate a difference along the timeframe, thus the combination of "had spent nearly six hours a week" and "by 1997" makes no sense here.
whereas身后是被动句,其缺少真正的执行者。单纯读划线部分,我们只能知道有将近六个小时被花费了,至于究竟是谁花费了这六个小时,我们不得而知,自然本选项就无法和In 1981 children in the United States spent an average of slightly less than two and a half hours a week doing household chores形成对比(whereas)关系。
C选项whereas后面没有spend的主语,不构成和前句的逻辑关系。
C选项whereas后面没有spend的主语,不构成和前句的逻辑关系。
B虽然也没有说明是谁,但that figure就代表了和前句一样的spent by children in the US
that figure growing to nearly six hours a week in 1997指figure在1997这一年长到6小时,没有体现出增长过程
B,grown to 6是一种成果,用by+时间是可以的;that figure概括了或者说指代之前提到的2个半小时,ok
C,将主动式转变为被动式不带by sb,去除了逻辑主语,但这里应该要说明是children spent而不是别的人spent 6 hours才能满足语意。
D,要么写the figure要么直接写出来数字是多少,不能用the figure of 4000,冗余。如:In 1990 the population of Las Vegas was 400,000, but by 2010 that figure had grown to 1,200,000.这里用that figure,因为不能写成400000 had grown to 1200000.
如果不涉及触达某种成果或发生状态的改变,不用by,如:The scholarship was offered to graduate students who had graduated from their undergraduate institutions between 2000 and 2005.
A,by 1997 they had spent nearly six hours a week.spend是一个持续的状态,在本题的前后语境里,既没有发生改变也没用持续以至触达一个结果,不能用by+时间;B,by 1997 that figure had grown to nearly six hours a week.grown to表示触达一个结果,意思是在1997年的时候或之前的任何一个时间点,这个数字增长到了6小时。
by+时间修饰发生改变的状态或维持动作以至触达某个成果,如:
Anyone who had not performed well enough to qualify for the Olympic Trials by December could no longer try out for the team.意思是anyone指代的人在1990年前没有达标,如果直到1990年还没有完成从不达标到达标这一转变的,会失去留队资格。
Pomeranians who have attained a body weight of fourteen pounds by the age of 1 year are classified as "throwback Pomeranians".意思是只要在1岁前的任何一个时点触达14磅这个状态,就可以被分级为"throwback Pomeranians".
whereas nearly six hours a week were spent in 1997.没有说s是谁spent,那么也可以是比如大人工作花费6小时,与前句没有了逻辑关系。
不要管时态
有明显的时间点的话,had就一般不冲突;that figure growing变成了附属的独立主格,而应该是并列的关系。
PREP07 Test 2-96 : There are hopeful signs that we are shifting away from our heavy reliance on fossil fuels: more than ten times as much energy is generated through wind power now as was the case in 1990. 举一反三
PREP07 Test 2-96 : There are hopeful signs that we are shifting away from our heavy reliance on fossil fuels: more than ten times as much energy is generated through wind power now as was the case in 1990. 举一反三
B用过去完成时是可以的,因为用了;--分号。by 1997就提供了一个过去的时间点,而达到6小时一周是发生在1997年之前的。C继续错~~~~D 中compare with就近修饰家务活,就不对了。
C中whereas前后两句话没有共同描述的对象,所以两句话之间缺乏了转折关系。E中独立主格结构,但前后两句话时间明显相差很远,不能用。
choice b is ok:
- past perfect makes sense, because the figure had finished growing by then. (note that the past perfect makes sense here, even though there isn't an explicit 'second event': in the present, we'd say the figure has grown to such-and-such a level, so, by 1997 [a past date], we'd say it had grown to such-and-such a level.
这题挺好的!
因为过去完成时,排除了AB。。。结果B是对的,想Ron的逻辑还是觉得有点不明白
choice c: needless use of the passive voice. at best this is awkward, and at worst it makes the reader think that the 6 hours of chores were being performed by someone else (i.e., not children).