Financial uncertainties from the accident at Three Mile Island may prove even more deterring to the nuclear industry than political opposition is.
from the accident at Three Mile Island may prove even more deterring to the nuclear industry than political opposition is
from the accident at Three Mile Island may prove to be even more serious a deterrent to the nuclear industry than political opposition
from the accident at Three Mile Island may prove to be an even more serious deterrent to the nuclear industry than political opposition
resulting from the accident at Three Mile Island may prove to be an even more serious deterrent to the nuclear industry than is political opposition
resulting from the accident at Three Mile Island may prove even more deterring to the nuclear industry than political opposition
1.逻辑推理,than平行,the nuclear industry than political oppositiond会产生歧义,是拿这两个在对比,所以应该加is,表示主句之间的对比。BCE错
2.简洁表达,even more serious a deterrent不如an even more serious deterrent读起来明白,而且前者会产生歧义,不仅是一个a deterrent,还可以是其他东西?B错
3.Diction,清晰表达,Furthermore, the sentence would be clearer if it said resulting from,ABC相对更差
4.动词,deterring to the nuclear industry 用法错误,deter是及物动词,应该直接接名词,AE错
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