Except for a concert performance that the composer himself staged in 1911,Scott Joplin's ragtime opera"Treemonisha"was not produced until 1972,sixty-one years after its completion.
Except for a concert performance that the composer himself staged
Except for a concert performance with the composer himself staging it
Besides a concert performance being staged by the composer himself
Excepting a concert performance that the composer himself staged
With the exception of a concert performance with the staging done by the composer himself
E.g., a variety show with performers juggling chainsaws implies that the performers juggle chainsaws IN the show. (If it's just a bunch of performers who have juggled chainsaws at some point in their career, but are doing something else in this particular show, then __ing doesn't work.)
Similarly, "a performance with the composer staging..." implies that the composer was actually staging stuff during the performance. Nonsense, that
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