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The 19-year-old pianist and composer performed his most recent work all over Europe, Asia, and North America last year, winning prestigious awards in both London as well as Tokyo for his achievement at so young an age, and he is hoping to continue composing now that he has returned to Chicago.
winning prestigious awards in both London as well as Tokyo for his achievement at so young an age, and he is hoping
winning prestigious awards both in London and Tokyo for his achievement at such a young age, and hoping
having won prestigious awards both in London and Tokyo for his achievement at so young an age, hoping
winning prestigious awards in both London and Tokyo for his achievement at such a young age, and he hopes
having won prestigious awards both in London as well as Tokyo for his achievement at so young an age, and he hopes
题目分析：
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选项分析：
A选项：both…and…为习惯表达，不能用both + as well as。
B选项：并列连词and身后的ing短语hoping to continue composing now that he has returned to Chicago在and身前没有平行对象。注意，此处的winning和hoping不能平行。这是因为and身前的逗号将winning prestigious awards both in London and Tokyo for his achievement at such a young age变成了插入语（两端的逗号隔开了这个短语和主句）。
另外，both…and…具有平行错误。只能说both in London and in Tokyo。
C选项：both…and…具有平行错误同(B)。另外，having won应改为winning。在分词短语中加have表示先时性，在逻辑上，不可能win这个动作先发生于perform。
D选项：Correct. 本选项在逻辑和语法上均是正确的。
E选项：both的习语错误同(A)；having won错误同(C)。
请问C选项中，having won是插入语还是可以看做和hoping平行？
我觉得是平行的话也要加and，就是doing and doing ，你不加的话，我可以认为hoping 的粉刺短语是修饰前面的having won短语，或者是某某的后置定语，
从句意的逻辑性上看，winning prestigious awards的内容和hope to continue composing无法构成平行，即如果硬要组成平行结构，即句意有误。
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