Around 1900, fishermen in the Chesapeake Bay area landed more than seventeen million pounds of shad in a single year, but by 1920, overfishing and the proliferation of milldams and culverts that have blocked shad migrations up their spawning streams had reduced landings to less than four million pounds.
that have blocked shad migrations up their spawning streams had reduced landings to less
that blocked shad from migrating up their spawning streams had reduced landings to less
that blocked shad from migrating up their spawning streams reduced landings to a lower amount
having blocked shad from migrating up their spawning streams reduced landings to less
having blocked shad migrations up their spawning streams had reduced landings to an amount lower
续:
E. The present-perfect participial phrase must be set off with commas; the pronoun
their, which is also in (A), nonsensically refers to migrations, and the comparative
expression to an amount lower is unnecessarily wordy
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