The computer company's present troubles are a result of technological stagnation, marketing missteps, and managerial blunders so that several attempts to revise corporate strategies have failed to correct it.
so that several attempts to revise corporate strategies have failed to correct it.
so that several attempts at revising corporate strategies have failed to correct
in that several attempts at revising corporate strategies have failed to correct them
that several attempts to revise corporate strategies have failed to correct
that several attempts at revising corporate strategies have failed to correct them
NOTE: In A, B, and C, the phrases "so that" and "in that" would modify some kind of action, as in "He went to the store so that he could find Amy" or "It was a bad move in that it resulted in him getting dumped by Amy." We don't have an action we want to modify here (i.e., the only verb we have in the first half of the sentence is "are", and we're probably not modifying that).
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