Japanese researchers are producing a series of robots that can identify human facial expressions, to which they will then respond; their goal is primarily creating a robot that will empathize with us.
expressions, to which they will then respond; their goal is primarily creating
expressions, then responding to them; primarily to create
expressions and then respond to them; the researchers' primary goal is to create
expressions as well as giving a response to them; their primary goal is creation of
expressions and responding to them; primarily, the researchers' goal is creating
A)they和their指代不同的对象,不优;which 指代expression 不对
B D E)then responding和未划线部分平行,变成researcher responding to to expression, 意思不对
C)identify... and respond... 平行,都是由robot发出的,对;后面researcher 作为主语取消歧义,好
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A to which they will then respond; their goal is primarily creating
they是机器人,their又是研究者,不能这么指代
the researchers' primary goal所以选C,写全了
1、and前后应平行,杀E(responding配identify)
2、;前后都是完整句子,杀B
3、同一个句子里,them指完expressions,不能直接用their代指researchers,应重复先行词,杀AD
4、responding既不是结果状语、也不是伴随状语,最好的是平行,robot既能……又能……,杀BE
这个题我是根据后面排除的,选c,但是b选项,就近修饰前面的句子应该修饰的是robots can identify human facial expressions,感觉没什么问题
A选项代词they从语义上应该是指代robots机器人,后面their goal指代的是researchers的目标。代词的绝对性错误
A选项代词they从语义上应该是指代robots机器人,后面their goal指代的是researchers的目标。代词的绝对性错误
D E and 和 as well as 前后不平行
分号; 后面应该要接起一个independent sentence
注意代词,还有动词短语的正确表达方式
A选项代词they从语义上应该是指代robots机器人,后面their goal指代的是researchers的目标。代词的绝对性错误
A they 和 their指代不同, primarily 修饰位置错误
D E and 和 as well as 前后不平行
what is wrong with option A. Is there a problem with a pronoun "They" . It can refer to robots as well as researchers....
they their 逻辑上指代对象不同
A they their逻辑上指代对象不同。
identify与respond是两个相互独立的动作,平行最优
ABD选项代词their ,them指代模糊;E选项respond应与identify平行
expressions, to which they (they 应该要指代研究者,不是机器人)will then respond;
(E) responding没有平行的对象;primarily位置错误,置于句首则修饰整个句子; goal和creating概念不对等
句子结构: Japanese researchers are producing … that can identify…and then respond…; the…goal is to…
(A) 第二个分句中的their在逻辑意思上应该指代researchers,与前面出现的代词they指代对象不一致; goalc和creating概念不对等; primarily修饰creating,逻辑意思错误
(B) 分号后面不是一个完整的句子;then是副词,不能连接句子,应该改为and then
(C) 正确, and then respond和can identify并列;重复the researcher消除了指代歧异;goal和to do概念对等
(D) giving没有平行的对象,且使用give a response不如直接用动词respond简洁有效;goal和creation概念不对等,“目标”只能是去做某事,而不可能是一个名词“creation”