Ramón pointed out that food high in whole-grain fiber creates the energy we need to fight illnesses—as do vegetables and lean proteins.
fiber creates the energy we need to fight illnesses—as do vegetables and lean proteins
fiber in addition to vegetables and lean proteins, create the energy we need to fight illnesses
fiber creates the energy we need to fight illnesses, along with vegetables and lean proteins
fiber,vegetables, and lean proteins creates the energy we need to fight illnesses
fiber,as vegetables and lean proteins, create the energy we need to fight illnesses
题目分析:Ramon指出富有全麦纤维的食物提供了我们用来抵抗疾病的能量——像蔬菜和瘦肉蛋白那样。
选项分析:
A选项:正确。“as do vegetables and leanproteins” 还原之后为“As vegetables and lean proteins createthe energy we need to fight illness.”。
B选项:首先,“in addition to”作为介词是修饰“food high in whole-grain fiber”的定语,此时发出create这个动作的主语只有food,主谓不一致,错误。且逗号将主(food)谓(create)直接隔开是不合理的。
C选项:句尾的“along with vegetables andlean protein”作为介宾短语,和主句被逗号隔开,因此它作为状语在修饰主句的谓语动词,但“和蔬菜和瘦肉蛋白一起”不能作为修饰create的状语,合理的应该是“蔬菜和蛋白质也做提供全麦纤维这样一件事”。
D选项:如果vegetables、lean proteins和food并列,那么谓语动词是单数,就出现了主谓不一致的错误;如果和fiber并列,则不合逻辑,我们不能说“富含全麦纤维、蔬菜和瘦肉蛋白的食物 提供了能量”,而合理的是 含有全麦纤维的食物、蔬菜、和瘦肉蛋白这三者都分别提供能量。
E选项:“as vegetables and leanproteins”是一个插入语。其特点是:把插入语撇去不看,是不会影响句子的连贯性。那么这时候,此选项中主语是food,谓语是create,出现了主谓不一致的错误。
除非有插入语,不然用逗号单独隔开主语和谓语是不行的
主谓不一致可以排除BDE,剩下AC
B in addition to是介宾结构做后置定语,所以主语仍然是单数的food
D 主语是food, vegetables, and proteins,谓语要用create
E 主语是food,谓语用creates
C along with ...做状语修饰主句谓语动词create,along with是“与...一起”的意思,应该修饰food,而不是修饰create这个动作。
C选项:句尾的“along with vegetables andlean protein”作为介宾短语,和主句被逗号隔开,因此它作为状语在修饰主句的谓语动词,但“和蔬菜和瘦肉蛋白一起”不能作为修饰create的状语,合理的应该是“蔬菜和蛋白质也做提供全麦纤维这样一件事”。
E选项:“as vegetables and leanproteins”是一个插入语。其特点是:把插入语撇去不看,是不会影响句子的连贯性。那么这时候,此选项中主语是food,谓语是create,出现了主谓不一致的错误。
B. 应该是creates
C. along with 意思错误
D. 应该是create
E. 应该是creates
Split#1:主谓一致,排除选项B、D、E
Split#1:根据语义,排除选项C
food 作为食物大类的意思的话 是不可数: We can't live without food and water
作为食物的种类时就是可数名词.
例如: There are all kinds of foods on the table.
破折号之后接接完整句子对前面进行解释说明 ---A 选项有省略 没补出来
或者两个破折号隔开表示插入语
破折号要用到句子结尾
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C选项:句尾的“along with vegetables andlean protein”作为介宾短语,和主句被逗号隔开,因此它作为状语在修饰主句的谓语动词,但“和蔬菜和瘦肉蛋白一起”不能作为修饰create的状语,合理的应该是“蔬菜和蛋白质也做提供全麦纤维这样一件事”。
A选项:正确。“as do vegetables and leanproteins” 还原之后为“As vegetables and lean proteins createthe energy we need to fight illness.”。
as表示像……一样/当……时/因为时是连词,只能接句子,不能接名词;as/as,the same/as是并列连词,接名词是结构的省略
答案B in addition to 不能算做compound plural word,所以create要用singular
food是单数
体会C选项带来的歧义
C选项 along with变成了 flight illness, vegetables, and high proteins
贴一个gmatclub的解释,This is like saying "food creates the energy we need to fight X, along with Y and Z". That is, the energy to fight vegetables and lean proteins. And while many people may feel the need to fight vegetables, that is not the intended meaning.
为何倒装???
food单数,creates
C选项 along with变成了修饰create的状语,不符合句意
a选项as后面是倒装么?为什么要倒装?
贴一个gmatclub的解释,This is like saying "food creates the energy we need to fight X, along with Y and Z". That is, the energy to fight vegetables and lean proteins. And while many people may feel the need to fight vegetables, that is not the intended meaning.