Although the company's executives have admitted that there had been accounting irregularities involving improper reporting of revenue, as well as of failure to record expenses, they could not yet say precisely how much money was involved.
the company's executives have admitted that there had been accounting irregularities involving improper reporting of revenue, as well as of failure to record
the company's executives admitted that there had been accounting irregularities involving improper reporting of revenue and failure to record
the company's executives, admitting accounting irregularities involving improper reporting of revenue and failure in recording
admission by the company's executives was made of accounting irregularities involving improper reporting of revenue and failure in recording
admission by the company's executives that there had been accounting irregularities involving improper reporting of revenue and failure in recording
转折前vs.转折后的时态一致;且although句子内有had been,admit应该用过去式而非现在完成时。
as well as of...多此一举,显得句子累赘。
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