It was only after Katharine Graham became publisher of The Washington Post in 1963 that it moved into the first rank of American newspapers, and it was under her command that the paper won high praise for its unrelenting reporting of the Watergate scandal.
It was only after Katharine Graham became publisher of The Washington Post in 1963 that it moved into the first rank of American newspapers, and it was under her command that the paper won high praise
It was only after Katharine Graham's becoming publisher of The Washington Post in 1963 that it moved into the first rank of American newspapers, and under her command it had won high praise
Katharine Graham became publisher of The Washington Post in 1963, and only after that did it move into the first rank of American newspapers, having won high praise under her command
Moving into the first rank of American newspapers only after Katharine Graham became its publisher in 1963, The Washington Post, winning high praise under her command
Moving into the first rank of American newspapers only after Katharine Graham's becoming its publisher in 1963, The Washington Post won high praise under her command
A 句子结构,it做形式主语引导了两个并列句,通过and连接。 第二个it只能指代华盛顿期刊,正确。correct
B 第一it 无指代,形式主语表强调,而and连接的后半句并没有用it进行强调。 平行结构错误。错 代词太多请小心
C having won high praise动作发出者应该是华盛顿期刊,having won修饰前面一句话。 错
D 缺少动词, fragment
E moving 开头接,表明moving的动作先发生,即在KG上任后华盛顿期刊先排行第一,再在她的指挥下得奖。
而原文的逻辑是表达 成为行业第一和得奖是并列的关系。 改变逻辑,绝对错误。
E "moving" and "becoming" indicate something that's going on right now - this should be in the past. And "after Katherine Graham's becoming its publisher" is horrible.
That leaves us with A (where the second "it" pronoun is fine, by the way, because both logically and structurally it refers to Wash Post).
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