Due to automobile-related jobs in the 1920's employing one of every eight workers, the automobile industry dominated the American economy.
Due to automobile-related jobs in the 1920's employing one of every eight workers, the automobile industry dominated the American economy.
One out of every eight workers were employed in automobile-related jobs in the 1920's, with the American economy being dominated by the automobile industry.
The automobile industry dominated the American economy in the 1920's, with one of every eight workers having been employed in automobile-related jobs.
In the 1920's, the automobile industry had dominated the American economy, when one out of every eight workers was employed in an automobile-related job.
In the 1920's, the automobile industry dominated the American economy, with one out of every eight workers employed in an automobile-related job.
due to只能修饰名词,or = caused by
D、具体时间点不用过去完成时,过去完成时必须强调时间的先后逻辑关系,而 in the 1920's 放在句首修饰整个句子
C、having been现在完成时出现在过去时间点,改变句子意思
B、redundancy,关键是句子重心变化
A、employing的动作发出者不应该是jobs
AB中的 in the 1920's 修饰对象存在歧义
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