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Due to automobile-related jobs in the 1920's employing one of every eight workers, the automobile industry dominated the American economy.
Due to automobile-related jobs in the 1920's employing one of every eight workers, the automobile industry dominated the American economy.
One out of every eight workers were employed in automobile-related jobs in the 1920's, with the American economy being dominated by the automobile industry.
The automobile industry dominated the American economy in the 1920's, with one of every eight workers having been employed in automobile-related jobs.
In the 1920's, the automobile industry had dominated the American economy, when one out of every eight workers was employed in an automobile-related job.
In the 1920's, the automobile industry dominated the American economy, with one out of every eight workers employed in an automobile-related job.
(A) employing的逻辑主语是jobs，不符合逻辑，应该是industry;时间状语in the 1920’s的位置不正确，存在歧义，可能是jobs in the 1920’s，也可能是in the 1920’s employing…。
(B) with the American economy being dominated的表达方式不如直接用动词形式更简洁有效，而且被动语态的表达方式也不够清楚;原句的主谓语the automobile industry dominated…变成了修饰成分，改变了原句强调重心。
(C) 时间状语in the 1920’s的位置不正确，应该置于句首修饰整个句子;one of every eight workers与原句要表达的one out of every eight workers不同，前者是“八人中的一人”，而后者是“每八人中就有一人”;with… having been…的表达方式不清楚。
(D) in the 1920’s是过去的时间，应该用过去时态，而不是过去完成时态;由when引导时间状语从句，改变了原句所要表达的意思。
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