The computer company registered a $16 million net loss for the year, largely because it was profitable only overseas, where much of their profits were used for paying higher taxes, while continuing to lose money in North America.
where much of their profits were used for paying higher taxes, while continuing
where much of their profits went to pay higher taxes, as they continued
where much of its profit went to pay higher taxes, while it continued
with much of their profits going to pay higher taxes, while continuing
with much of the profit used for paying higher taxes, as it continued
1.with作为独立主格结构,功能类似于一个带有自己主语的状语从句,往前修饰it was profitable overseas。 然而从逻辑上1)在海外盈利 和2)利润都用于支付高昂的税金 ;这两句话并不具备修饰关系。where修饰overseas更好
2.while是连词,连接两个完整句子,如A所写作伴随,句间关系上也不对
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