After decreasing steadily in the mid-1990's, the percentage of students in the United States finishing high school or having earned equivalency diplomas increased in the last three years of the decade, up to 86.5 percent in 2000 from 85.9 percent in 1999 and 84.8 percent in 1998.
finishing high school or having earned equivalency diplomas increased in the last three years of the decade, up to 86.5 percent in 2000 from 85.9 percent in 1999 and
finishing high school or earning equivalency diplomas, increasing in the last three years of the decade, rising to 86.5 percent in 2000 from 85.9 percent in 1999 and from
having finished high school or earning an equivalency diploma increased in the last three years of the decade, and rose to 86.5 percent in 2000 from 85.9 percent in 1999 and from
who either finished high school or they earned an equivalency diploma, increasing in the last three years of the decade, rose to 86.5 percent in 2000 from 85.9 percent in 1999 and
who finished high school or earned equivalency diplomas increased in the last three years of the decade, to 86.5 percent in 2000 from 85.9 percent in 1999 and
A选项是因为up赘余吗?
主要的问题是,having earned。因为分词中的have表示先时性,按照这个题的说法,就是earn发生在finish之前了,这在逻辑上有问题。
!!!蟹蟹老师!!!原来是这样!!!我也以为是赘余。。。
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(A) 表示极短暂动作的动词finish不用进行时态,故现在分词结构应该改为从句形式作定语;现在完成时having earned与前面的时态不一致;increase to是固定搭配,up多余,应该去掉。
(B) 表示极短暂动作的动词finish不用进行时态,故现在分词结构应该改为从句形式作定语;整个句子缺少谓语;finishing…, increasing…, rising…有并列的嫌疑,而且rise与increase语意重复。
(C) 现在完成时having finished与后面的时态不一致;rise与increase语意重复。
(D) either… or…连接的对象不对称,而且表达的意思也与原句有所不同;现在分词结构increasing有作定语就近修饰diplomas的歧义,increase应该是句子的谓语;rise与increase语意重复。
(E) 正确,who引导定语从句,修饰名词students,并列谓语finished or earned。
(a) is that the modifier "having finished high school" implies that the people have already finished high school by the timeframe of the sentence. in that case you wind up with something that's illogical, because they wouldn't be "students" anymore in that case.
a选项having earned是不对的
b选项缺少动词
c选项同a
d选项either or不平行
A, finish表示极短暂动作和结果,不用进行时态,也不用现在分词作定语
Wrong:Students finishing high school;
Right: Students who finished high school
in +时间表示时间点,不用完成时态
分词里面的having done/ to have done,表示发生时点先于主句动作。除此之外,用分词表示人物性质和用定语从句表示性质,没有差别
finishing high school or having earned equivalency diplomas, 表示earn发生在finish之前
finish high school 和 earn equivalency diploma 应该保持平行
finish不能用进行时态
C选项rise和increase重复,时态不平行
C选项中的increase和rose重复
"finishing high school " 这种,是一定要就近修饰的对吗?