A recent review of pay scales indicates that CEO's now earn an average of 419 times more pay than blue-collar workers, compared to a ratio of 42 times in 1980.
that CEO's now earn an average of 419 times more pay than blue-collar workers, compared to a ratio of 42 times
that, on average, CEO's now earn 419 times the pay of blue-collar workers, a ratio that compares to 42 times
that, on average, CEO's now earn 419 times the pay of blue-collar workers, as compared to 42 times their pay, the ratio
CEO's who now earn on average 419 times more pay than blue-collar workers, as compared to 42 times their pay, the ratio
CEO's now earning an average of 419 times the pay of blue-collar workers, compared to the ratio of 42 times
1. ABC比较的应该是419 times the pay和42 times their pay
单独比419 times the pay和ratio或者42 times—比较对象不平行
2. AB 42 times倍数不能单独用,C 倍数后面➕n,或者代词(如 twice that in 1999)这么用非常好
3.A a ratio of 42times—wordy,因为42times就是一种倍数(比率)=ratio,直接说42 times就行了
但是CD中,ratio做42times的同位语 可以
4.B compare不用主动,应用compared分词表比较
(常见错误:when compare… Comparing… )
5.on average单独拿出来 插入语
419 times the pay和42 times their pay比,非常对等
a ratio在后面做同位语修饰42times their pay,避免了wordy
也就是说 分开了compare和 ratio 结构很清晰
分析得很棒
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