The Swedish warship Vasa, sunk in 1628 and raised in 1961, was preserved in the cold water of Stockholm harbor, where low salinity inhibits the growth of marine borers that in most seas devour every exposed scrap of a sunken ship's wooden hull.
was preserved in the cold water of Stockholm harbor, where low salinity inhibits
being preserved in the cold water of Stockholm harbor, because the low salinity there is able to inhibit
and preserved in the cold water of Stockholm harbor, the low salinity there inhibits
having been preserved in the cold water of Stockholm harbor, whose low salinity inhibits
had been preserved in the cold water of Stockholm harbor, because of low salinity there inhibiting
B:being preserved是修饰的成分,整个句子没有谓语
C:没有能和and preserved平行的部分
D:having been preserved不能没有逗号的修饰一个名词(The Swedish warship Vasa)
E:sunk和had been preserved那个先哪个后?
because of low salinity表明的是因为低盐,不是的,是低盐度能阻止生锈的这件事儿
D,介宾结构 doing前要加主语只能用所有格,否则不能表示是某人做的某事
没有时间标志说明需要用过去完成时;because of… inhibiting的表达方式不正确,而且原句也没有表达因果关系。
动词形式-过去完成时,没有明显的时间标志或逻辑关系提示,尽量保持原句时态。