The computer company has announced that it will purchase the color-printing division of a rival company for $950 million, which is part of a deal that will make it the largest manufacturer in the office color-printing market.
million, which is part of a deal that will make
million, a part of a deal that makes
million, part of a deal making
million as a part of a deal to make
million as part of a deal that will make
A There is no antecedent for the relative
pronoun which.
B Like a relative pronoun, the appositive
phrase (a part . . .) must have a noun or noun
phrase as a clear antecedent; the verb makes
should be future tense.
C The appositive phrase requires a clear
antecedent; making does not indicate future
tense.
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