The computer company has announced that it will purchase the color-printing division of a rival company for $950 million, which is part of a deal that will make it the largest manufacturer in the office color-printing market.
million, which is part of a deal that will make
million, a part of a deal that makes
million, part of a deal making
million as a part of a deal to make
million as part of a deal that will make
(C) million, part of a deal making (同位语的错误同B;making表示the deal is making it the largest xxx at the time when the company will purchase the division, 时态不匹配,应该都用将来时;另外说下 a part of a deal 和part of a deal都可以对;)
(D) million as a part of a deal to make (to make的主语是the company,导致the company will make it the largest xxx, 那么这里对自己的动作需要用到反身代词itself而不是it,e.g. 我们不能说I made me happy. 要说I made myself happy.)
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