The computer company has announced that it will purchase the color-printing division of a rival company for $950 million, which is part of a deal that will make it the largest manufacturer in the office color-printing market.
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"making xxxx" is a consequence of the action. If you write "a deal making xxxx", you're implying that the deal is making xxxx at the time of the action described.
E.g., if you write My teenage daughter wears skirts over leggings, exemplifying a trend sweeping the nation, you're implying that the trend is already "sweeping the nation" right now. If my daughter's actions start the trend, this sentence isn't accurate.
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