The computer company has announced that it will purchase the color-printing division of a rival company for $950 million, which is part of a deal that will make it the largest manufacturer in the office color-printing market.
million, which is part of a deal that will make
million, a part of a deal that makes
million, part of a deal making
million as a part of a deal to make
million as part of a deal that will make
C中用making的话是做独立主格,但是表明这件事情伴随主句的事情已经发生了,可是主句的事情是将来时,还未发生,那伴随的事件起码在将来才会发生,用making不好。
D中to make表示the corporation will purchase sth as a part of deal to make【 it】 the largest manufacture, 可是原文中是说这个交易会使公司成为最大的,原文在这点上并没有逻辑错误,应该尊重原文,其次,如果C要对,起码把it 改成 itself才更正确。
E更尊重原文意思。
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