As the former chair of the planning board for 18 consecutive years and a board member for 28 years, Joan Philkill attended more than 400 meetings and reviewed more than 700 rezoning applications.
这里不能出现任何与former 有关的词,一是因为后面的for 18 years,不能做前主席18年;二是从平行和逻辑一致性考虑,后面的board menber也没用former。这个句子看不出JP到底还在不在位子上,如果要把前主席的意思表达出来,可以用同位语+定语:the former chair of the planning board who was in that position for 18 consecutive years and the former board member working for 28 years, Joan Philkill …… for his duty
这里不能出现任何与former 有关的词,一是因为后面的for 18 years,不能做前主席18年;二是从平行和逻辑一致性考虑,后面的board menber也没用former。这个句子看不出JP到底还在不在位子上,如果要把前主席的意思表达出来,可以用同位语+定语:the former chair of the planning board who was in that position for 18 consecutive years and the former board member working for 28 years, Joan Philkill …… for his duty
原来如此。。。又是不细心。。。
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