Although unhappy with the high rent her company was paying for its suburban office building, the chief executive recognized rental rates for buildings in the suburbs as far lower than it typically is for property that is located within the city limits.
rental rates for buildings in the suburbs as far lower than it typically is for property that is located within the city limits
rental rates for buildings in the suburbs as being far lower than what the rates typically charged within the city limits had been for property located there
rental rates typically being charged for property located within the city limits to be far lower as they typically were within the city limits for the property there
that rental rates for buildings in the suburbs were far lower than rental rates typically being charged within the city limits for property located there
that rental rates for buildings in the suburbs were far lower than those typically charged for property located within the city limits
1) 宾语从句强调整体, 谓语+宾语结构只强调宾语
2) 对比对象中出现的重复名词用that或those代替,而不能用it来指代. that代替前面出现的单数名词,those代替前面出现的复数名词
3) 修饰成分应该尽量紧靠修饰对象
4) being的错误使用: 以下几种表达中being属于多余
a) being + n. b) being + adj. c) as being + n./adj./v-ing
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