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When drafting the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848, included in it by the author, Elizabeth Cady Stanton, was a call for female enfranchisement.
When drafting the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848, included in it by the author, Elizabeth Cady Stanton, was a call for female enfranchisement.
Including a call for female enfranchisement, a draft of the Declaration of Sentiments was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848 that Elizabeth Cady Stanton wrote.
When the Declaration of Sentiments drafted by Elizabeth Cady Stanton was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Convention in 1848, a call for female enfranchisement had been included in it.
A call for female enfranchisement, included in Elizabeth Cady Stanton's draft of the Declaration of Sentiments in 1848, that was adopted by the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention.
When Elizabeth Cady Stanton drafted the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848, she included in it a call for female enfranchisement.
C是when引导的状语从句修饰，导致的语义错误。
当declaration被采用的时候，一个有关女性解放的呼吁被包括了进去。when做状语，修饰的是included的动词。这句话没什么逻辑关系。如果是当declaration被采用的时候，一个有关女性解放的呼吁被引起，是合乎逻辑意思的。
E当ECS起草declaration（被在1848采用的宣言）的时候，她把女性解放的呼吁加了进去。逻辑更通畅。
关于被动语态：虽然ETS不区分主被动的优劣，但是被动的一个问题是，如果没有明确动作发出这（比如by，from等介词没有出现），就很容易导致主语不清的情况出现。比如C选项的has been included，可以by ECS，也可以by president，还可以by Barack Obama..等等。
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