When drafting the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848, included in it by the author, Elizabeth Cady Stanton, was a call for female enfranchisement.
When drafting the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848, included in it by the author, Elizabeth Cady Stanton, was a call for female enfranchisement.
Including a call for female enfranchisement, a draft of the Declaration of Sentiments was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848 that Elizabeth Cady Stanton wrote.
When the Declaration of Sentiments drafted by Elizabeth Cady Stanton was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Convention in 1848, a call for female enfranchisement had been included in it.
A call for female enfranchisement, included in Elizabeth Cady Stanton's draft of the Declaration of Sentiments in 1848, that was adopted by the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention.
When Elizabeth Cady Stanton drafted the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848, she included in it a call for female enfranchisement.
A, included in it was a call是个倒装句,伴随状语在句首的,主句主语同时也为伴随状语的逻辑主语应该紧接着出现,中间不能有其他的句子成分;再说call也不能做drafting的逻辑主语
B, 逻辑是:Elizabeth drafted the Declaration of Sentiments, the Declaration of Sentiments was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention,B句表述的是Elizabeth wrote Convention,错误
C, when the Declaration was adopted, a call had been included.A do B when C do D,when表示两个动作同时发生。这里had been表示在adopted之前included,时间逻辑互相冲突。
D, 构句错误。
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