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When drafting the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848, included in it by the author, Elizabeth Cady Stanton, was a call for female enfranchisement.
When drafting the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848, included in it by the author, Elizabeth Cady Stanton, was a call for female enfranchisement.
Including a call for female enfranchisement, a draft of the Declaration of Sentiments was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848 that Elizabeth Cady Stanton wrote.
When the Declaration of Sentiments drafted by Elizabeth Cady Stanton was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Convention in 1848, a call for female enfranchisement had been included in it.
A call for female enfranchisement, included in Elizabeth Cady Stanton's draft of the Declaration of Sentiments in 1848, that was adopted by the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention.
When Elizabeth Cady Stanton drafted the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848, she included in it a call for female enfranchisement.
1.when X, Y…. 注意:只有当A发生时，B才发生。A不发生时，B也不发生。
本题的当她起草某份宣言时，她在宣言里纳入了一个关于女性的呼吁，纳入呼吁发生的时间确实只限制在起草宣言时，when的用法ok
2.if you write "when X, Y"... Y has to be IN THE SAME TIMEFRAME as X.
the "had ___ed" tense implies a DIFFERENT (earlier) timeframe, so, it's nonsense in that context.
B：a draft was adopted❌，that也没有就近修饰，不太好
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