Mideast immigrants' rates of entrepreneurship exceed virtually every other immigrant group in the increasingly diverse United States economy.
Mideast immigrants' rates of entrepreneurship exceed
Mideast immigrants are exhibiting rates of entrepreneurship exceeding
Immigrants from the Mideast exhibit rates of entrepreneurship exceeding those of
The rates of entrepreneurship in immigrants from the Mideast exceed
The rates of Mideast immigrants' entrepreneurship exceeds those of
in general, "X's rate of Y" is preferred to "the rate of X's Y".
for instance, salesman X's rate of success is better than the rate of salesman X's success.
"Mideast immigrants" is wrong; "immigrants from the Mideast" is better. ("Mideast" can't be used as an adjective of nationality, for the same reason you can't say "Asia people" in place of "people from Asia".)
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