Mideast immigrants' rates of entrepreneurship exceed virtually every other immigrant group in the increasingly diverse United States economy.
Mideast immigrants' rates of entrepreneurship exceed
Mideast immigrants are exhibiting rates of entrepreneurship exceeding
Immigrants from the Mideast exhibit rates of entrepreneurship exceeding those of
The rates of entrepreneurship in immigrants from the Mideast exceed
The rates of Mideast immigrants' entrepreneurship exceeds those of
E 中两个错误:1. 主谓不一致,exceeds->exceed
2. 对比不一致,前半句是the rates of Mideast immigrants' entrepreneurship, 重点是entrepreneurship, 后半句是those (rates) of every other immigrant group ,重点是group
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