Mideast immigrants' rates of entrepreneurship exceed virtually every other immigrant group in the increasingly diverse United States economy.
Mideast immigrants' rates of entrepreneurship exceed
Mideast immigrants are exhibiting rates of entrepreneurship exceeding
Immigrants from the Mideast exhibit rates of entrepreneurship exceeding those of
The rates of entrepreneurship in immigrants from the Mideast exceed
The rates of Mideast immigrants' entrepreneurship exceeds those of
B in this version, "exceeding virtually every other immigrant group" is written as a modifier that is modifying "rates of entrepreneurship". therefore, you have a comparison between rates on the one hand and immigrant groups on the other hand -- a nonsense comparison.
C "those" stands for "rates of entrepreneurship", not just "rates"
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