Changes in sea level are not only a result of changes in water temperature, affecting water density, but of melting glaciers as well.
are not only a result of changes in water temperature, affecting water density, but of melting glaciers as well
not only result from changes in water temperature, which affect water density, but also when glaciers melt
are a result not only of changes in water temperature, which affect water density, but also the melting glaciers
result not only from changes in water temperature, which affect water density, but also from the melting of glaciers
result from not only changes in water temperature, affecting water density, but as well as when glaciers melt
AE、 affecting作为结果状语指的是前面整句话的结果,但其实 affect用来修饰的仅仅是temperature
B、,后面segment
C、后半句缺of,且抽象名词对应了具体名词
B but also 后面说 when 和前面也不对应,干掉!
C not only 后面跟 of 引导的介词短语 but also 后面跟名词,不对应,干掉
D not only 和 but also 后面都跟介词短语,比较对应,留着!
E 后面用 but as well,显然不合适,干掉!
水温是通过影响密度从而影响海平面的,所以密度那个不是和温度以及冰川融化平行的。就算A那个affecting做伴随状语,也不是修饰changes这个名词的