Based on records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress a statue of the goddess Athena and that this robe depicted scenes of a battle between Zeus, Athena's father, and giants.
Based on records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress
Based on records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women had collaborated to weave a new woolen robe with which to dress
According to records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress
Records from ancient Athens indicate that each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe with which they dressed
Records from ancient Athens indicate each year young Athenian women had collaborated to weave a new woolen robe for dressing
the right-hand part of the parallel construction is "...and THAT y", which creates the expectation of "THAT x" in the left-hand part of the sentence.
furthermore, the two parts actually have to be parallel ideas -- i.e., the ideas contained in the two parallel constructions have to represent the same type of thing/notion/idea, presented in the same way.
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