Industrialization and modern methods of insect control have improved the standard of living around the globe while at the same time they have introduced some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants, having gone virtually unregulated since they were developed more than 50 years ago.
while at the same time they have introduced some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants, having
while at the same time introducing some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants that have
while they have introduced some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants at the same time, which have
but introducing some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants at the same time that have
but at the same time introducing some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants, having
"C which跳跃修饰,错误
AE having gone做伴随错误 逻辑主语变成了methods
D that跳跃修饰错误
but是并列连词,前后必须平行,后面没有谓语错
""while"" is a subordinating construction, not a coordinating one, so it doesn't have the same strict parallelism requirements as does ""but""."
从属连词可以引导完整的句子作状语从句,也可以引导现在/过去分词,作状语从句
并列连词连接两个独立的句子,如果有省略,要求可以按照前个句子的结构补足被省略句子的结构,D/E and introducing没法补足,结构错误
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