A decade after initiating the nation's most comprehensive and aggressive antismoking program, per capita consumption of cigarettes in California declined from over 125 packs annually per person to about 60, a drop more than twice as great as in the nation as a whole.
per capita consumption of cigarettes in California declined from over 125 packs annually per person to about 60, a drop more than twice as great as
annual per capita consumption of cigarettes in California declined from over 125 packs to about 60, more than twice as great as that
California's annual per capita consumption of cigarettes declined from over 125 packs per person to about 60, more than twice as great as the drop
California has seen per capita consumption of cigarettes decline from over 125 packs annually to about 60, a drop more than twice as great as that
California has seen annual per capita consumption of cigarettes decline from over 125 packs per person to about 60, more than twice as great as that
E,twice修饰consumption decline twice。that指代consumption,consumption decline twice as great as consumption in the nation,比较对象可以接受
D,that指代the drop。相比E,优势在于同位语drop清晰地对前句的内容进行了概括,同时也使后面的that指代的对象更清晰(距离更近,不像consumption那么远,要反应很久才知道是consumption跟consumption比)
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