The yield per acre of coffee berries varies enormously in that a single tree, depending on both its size and on climate and altitude, could produce enough berries to make between one and twelve pounds of dried beans a year.
enormously in that a single tree, depending on both its size and on climate and altitude, could produce
enormously in that a single tree, dependent on its size and also on climate and altitude, is able to produce
enormously, because a single tree, depending on its size and on climate and altitude, is able to produce
enormously, because a single tree, being dependent on its size, climate, and altitude, is capable of producing
enormously, because a single tree, dependent both on its size as well as on climate and altitude, could produce
Stacey:generally stay in the same tense unless there's a reason to change. This one starts us out with "varies" and doesn't give us a reason to switch to "could produce." "Is" is better.
A 不平行
用depend,而不是dependent
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