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Ranked among great mathematical scientists such as Archimedes, Kepler, and Newton, Abu Ali al-Hasan ibn al-Haytham, who was born in Iraq in 965 C.E., had experimented extensively with light and vision, laying the foundation for modern optics and also the notion of science being based on experiment as well as on philosophical arguments.
al-Haytham, who was born in Iraq in 965 C.E., had experimented extensively with light and vision, laying the foundation for modern optics and also the notion of science being based on experiment as well as
al-Haytham, born in Iraq in 965 C.E., experimented extensively with light and vision, laying the foundation for modern optics and for the notion that science should be based on experiment as well as
al-Haytham, born in Iraq in 965 C.E. and who experimented extensively with light and vision, thereby laid the foundation for modern optics and also for the notion that science should be based on not only experiment but also
al-Haytham was born in Iraq in 965 C.E. and had experimented extensively with light and vision, laying the foundation for modern optics and for the notion that science should be based on not only experiment but also
al-Haytham was born in Iraq in 965 C.E., experimenting extensively with light and vision and laying the foundation for modern optics and for the notion of science being based on experiment as well as
A, 问题主要在于laying the notion of science being based on experiment
首先being based这样的结构是不应该出现的，表被动的动作做定语或状语直接用被动分词就好了，being based改成based；其次，of science和being based on experiment要么都做定语修饰notion，the notion based on experiment建立在实验上的信念，没有以实验为基础的科学合逻辑；要么being based on experiment作定语修饰science，奠定了科学的概念，什么样的科学？以实验为基础的科学，这样的意思没有奠定了科学应以实验为基础的概念合逻辑，laying the notion that science should be based on experiment
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