In the Louisiana Purchase of 1803, the United States acquired 828,000 square miles for about four cents an acre, which more than doubled the country's size and that brought its western border within reach of the Pacific Ocean.
In the Louisiana Purchase of 1803, the United States acquired 828,000 square miles for about four cents an acre, which more than doubled the country's size and that brought
For about four cents an acre the United States acquired, in the Louisiana Purchase of 1803, 828,000 square miles, more than doubling the country's size and it brought
With the Louisiana Purchase in 1803, the United States acquired 828,000 square miles for about four cents an acre, more than doubling its size and bringing
The United States, in the Louisiana Purchase of 1803, for about four cents an acre, acquired 828,000 square miles, more than doubling the country's size, bringing
Acquiring 828,000 square miles in the Louisiana Purchase of 1803, the United States bought it for about four cents an acre, more than doubling the country's size and bringing
choice a, which就近可以指代的名词是acre, 错误
choice b, 由于用逗号隔开的介词短语, in the Louisiana Purchase of 1803, 828,000 square miles,导致acquired的宾语从主干成分变成了修饰。语意错误
choice d, doubling 和bringing应该是平行的关系,因为美国购买土地带来的两个后果1)国土面积扩张2倍以上;2)西边的边境抵达了太平洋。choice c的写法变成了bringng往前修饰doubling
choice e, acquiring作为伴随状语修饰谓语动词bought, 句子的重心变了。并且doubling, bringing修饰的动词是bought,错误。这两个伴随状语应该是“acquire”的结果,而不是“bought”的结果。另外代词it想要指代Louisiana是有问题的,因为在名词Louisiana Purchase中,Louisiana相当于是一个形容词
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