Before scientists learned how to make a synthetic growth hormone, removing it painstakingly in small amounts from the pituitary glands of human cadavers.
scientists learned how to make a synthetic growth hormone, removing it painstakingly
scientists had learned about making a synthetic growth hormone, they had to remove it painstakingly
scientists learned how to synthesize the growth hormone, it had to be painstakingly removed
learning how to make a synthetic growth hormone, scientists had to remove it painstakingly
learning how to synthesize the growth hormone, it had to be painstakingly removed by scientists
C & D 主要是弄清指代问题
C: scientists learned how to synthesize the growth hormone, it had to be painstakingly removed
这里的it指的就是前面的the growth hormone
D: learning how to make a synthetic growth hormone, scientists had to remove it painstakingly
这里的it离得太远,且指代的是a synthetic growth hormone,句意就变成了“在科学家们学会如何制造合成荷尔蒙之前,他们只能将这种合成荷尔蒙从...中提取”,而本意不是提取合成荷尔蒙,而是最开始只能提取荷尔蒙,后来学会了合成荷尔蒙,句意!
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