Unlike many United States cities, where a river is no longer the focal point of urban life, the river in San Antonio winds through the middle of the business district, and the River Walk, or Paseo del Rio, is the city's most popular attraction.
Unlike many United States cities, where a river is no longer the focal point of urban life, the river in San Antonio
Unlike the river in many cities in the United States, which is no longer the focal point of urban life, in San Antonio the river
Today the river in many cities in the United States is no longer the focal point of urban life, unlike San Antonio, where it
In few United States cities today, a river is the focal point of urban life, but the river in San Antonio
No longer do many cities in the United States have a river as the focal point of urban life, but in San Antonio the river
B,前面有unlike the river,后面比较的对象river应该紧跟着出现,最好不要在中间插入in San Antonio
D,抛弃了no longer这个词,转用but来表示一个如何,另一个非如何。这种改变导致原句一个如何,另一个不再如何里的不再所包含的之前如此,后来不是的意思没有了,表意效果不好。
E,放弃了unlike,转用but来表示两件不同的事,并保留了no longer,无论语法还是语意逻辑都是ok的。
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