A recent poll indicates that many people in the United States hold a combination of conservative and liberal political views; i.e., they denounce big government, saying government is doing too much and has become too powerful, while at the same time supporting many specific government programs for health care, education, and the environment.
they denounce big government, saying government is doing too much and has become too powerful, while at the same time supporting
they denounce big government--they say that government is doing too much and has become too powerful--but supporting at the same time
they denounce big government, they say that government is doing too much and it has become too powerful, while they support at the same time
while they denounce big government, saying that government is doing too much and has become too powerful, at the same time supporting
while they are denouncing big government--they say that government is doing too much and it has become too powerful-- supporting at the same time
A:The main verb is "denounce." From there we have two things happening "saying government is doing too much...WHILE...supporting many specific programs." Saying/Supporting is parallel.
B:As soon as we say "they say" again, we've started a new independent clause. That's not okay. Also "they denounce...but supporting" doesn't work
C:they denounce……,they say……缺少连词. Also "at the same time" needs to come BEFORE "they support." If they place it afterwords, it sounds like the people are going to be supporting TWO things "at the same time."
D:"While" starts us off in something dependent, then both "saying" and "supporting" are opening up participial phrases. while引导从句,缺主句
E:while they……,supporting at the same time,缺主句。同C,at the same time位置放置的不好,这样会有supporting TWO things at the same time 的歧义。
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