Since 1990 the global economy has grown more than it did during the 10,000 years from the beginning of agriculture to 1950.
Since 1990 the global economy has grown more than it did during the 10,000 years from the beginning of agriculture
Since 1990 the growth of the global economy has been more than that during 10,000 years, from when agriculture began
The growth of the global economy since 1990 exceeds that which had been for 10,000 years from the beginning of agriculture
The growth of the global economy since 1990 exceeds what it has been for 10,000 years, from when agriculture began
The growth of the global economy since 1990 exceeds what it did for the 10,000 years from the beginning of agriculture
there's nothing ungrammatical about 'from when', because the clause starting with 'when' is a perfectly legitimate noun clause (i.e., 'when agriculture began' serves as a noun. however:
- regardless of where the gmat stands on the issue, 'the beginning of agriculture' is unquestionably better than 'when agriculture began' (i.e., an actual noun is almost always superior to a circuitous noun clause, when possible)
C) first, you've got a "which" modifier that isn't preceded by a comma, so that's an automatic failure. (note that you can use preposition + which without a comma -- e.g., the box in which you placed your valuables -- but you cannot do so with just plain "which".)
more importantly, "had been" is not parallel to anything in the other half of the sentence; in order to use a parallel structure that contains a form of "to be", you must have another form of "to be" in the other half of the parallel structure.
D) you can't use the present perfect if the time interval is over. If the trend continues into the present day, then the present perfect is appropriate.
Even if that were fixed, choice D still suffers from fatal wordiness / lack of concision, especially in comparison to the correct choice."
E) 'what it did' doesn't make any sense:
* the growth didn't 'do' anything
* there's no other verb to which 'did' could logically be parallel to complete the comparison
1 * if you have than/as + subject + FORM OF "TO BE" as the second half of a comparison, then you must have another form of "to be" in the first half of the comparison.
or, there should be something in the first half that would make sense with "to be" in front of it.
2 * if you have than/as + subject + HELPING VERB as the second half of a comparison, you can have just about any other form of the same verb in the first part, as determined by context.
3 * if you have than/as + subject + FORM OF "TO DO" as the second half of a comparison, then you must have an ACTION VERB[/b] (or another form of "to do") in the first half of the comparison.
here are some examples:
#1
the air quality of las vegas is higher this year than it was in 2005.
parking spots are disappearing much more quickly today than they were yesterday.
#2
james can negotiate with salespeople more effectively than stephanie can. (comparing their abilities)
james can negotiate with salespeople more effectively than he does. (his ability exceeds his actual performance, probably because he just isn't trying very hard)
#3
parking spots disappeared much faster today than they did yesterday.
tanya eats more slowly than she did when she was a teenager. (note that "did" doesn't have to have the same tense as the action verb)
1 * if you have than/as + subject + FORM OF "TO BE" as the second half of a comparison, then you must have another form of "to be" in the first half of the comparison.
or, there should be something in the first half that would make sense with "to be" in front of it.
2 * if you have than/as + subject + HELPING VERB as the second half of a comparison, you can have just about any other form of the same verb in the first part, as determined by context.
3 * if you have than/as + subject + FORM OF "TO DO" as the second half of a comparison, then you must have an ACTION VERB[/b] (or another form of "to do") in the first half of the comparison.
here are some examples:
#1
the air quality of las vegas is higher this year than it was in 2005.
parking spots are disappearing much more quickly today than they were yesterday.
#2
james can negotiate with salespeople more effectively than stephanie can. (comparing their abilities)
james can negotiate with salespeople more effectively than he does. (his ability exceeds his actual performance, probably because he just isn't trying very hard)
#3
parking spots disappeared much faster today than they did yesterday.
tanya eats more slowly than she did when she was a teenager. (note that "did" doesn't have to have the same tense as the action verb)
there's nothing ungrammatical about 'from when', because the clause starting with 'when' is a perfectly legitimate noun clause (i.e., 'when agriculture began' serves as a noun. however:
- regardless of where the gmat stands on the issue, 'the beginning of agriculture' is unquestionably better than 'when agriculture began' (i.e., an actual noun is almost always superior to a circuitous noun clause, when possible)
C) first, you've got a "which" modifier that isn't preceded by a comma, so that's an automatic failure. (note that you can use preposition + which without a comma -- e.g., the box in which you placed your valuables -- but you cannot do so with just plain "which".)
more importantly, "had been" is not parallel to anything in the other half of the sentence; in order to use a parallel structure that contains a form of "to be", you must have another form of "to be" in the other half of the parallel structure.
D) you can't use the present perfect if the time interval is over. If the trend continues into the present day, then the present perfect is appropriate.
Even if that were fixed, choice D still suffers from fatal wordiness / lack of concision, especially in comparison to the correct choice."
E) 'what it did' doesn't make any sense:
* the growth didn't 'do' anything
* there's no other verb to which 'did' could logically be parallel to complete the comparison
A Since 1990 the global economy has grown more than it did during the 10,000 years from the beginning of agriculture
比较结构是the global economy has grown more than the global economy(it整体指代) grew
合理
且后面from...to...也是平行结构,beginning和1950相较于when和1950更好
B Since 1990 the growth of the global economy has been more than that during 10,000 years,from when agriculture began
错选B
比较结构是the growth of the global economy has been more than the growth(that) during 10,000 years is
根据Ron所说,that+prep在比较结构中最好严格与前方平行,所以前方也应该有growth during之类的对照
其次,the growth is more than growth is 并不好,不如faster than the growth is
最后,when和1950不如beginning和1950平行
C The growth of the global economy since 1990 exceeds that which had been for 10,000 years from the beginning of agriculture
没有使用had been的标志词;
which不能不加“,”,除非是介词+which的形式(存疑)
had been与前半句无对应,应该是前半句有be的内容,后半句才能有had been这种省略
D\E中it完全指代,后半句根本不成逻辑
there's nothing ungrammatical about 'from when', because the clause starting with 'when' is a perfectly legitimate noun clause (i.e., 'when agriculture began' serves as a noun. however:
- it's possible that the gmat does consider such constructions wrong; the only way to tell is to see if they say so in any official answer choices
- regardless of where the gmat stands on the issue, 'the beginning of agriculture' is unquestionably better than 'when agriculture began' (i.e., an actual noun is almost always superior to a circuitous noun clause, when possible)
C 不用had been。句子里没有过去式标志
D 不用has been,过去那段时间的增长对现在没有影响了
E it did有问题,did在前面没有比较对应
when it began VS the beginning of...
B,since 1990作状语修饰 the growth has been more,语意是:自从1990年以来,经济增长比农业开始以来的1000年的经济增长还要多。不是自1990年来就一直多,而是自1990年来的经济增长比之前1000年的增长总和还要多。
如:
Please remain seated during the performance.
There are extra flights to Colorado during the winter.
I'll stay here for a week.
同理,economic grow during 10000 years要比 for 10000 years好
2、Higher/lower Growth,grow faster/more slowly