With a new park, stadium, and entertainment complex along the Delaware River, Trenton, New Jersey, is but one of a large number of communities that is looking to use its waterfront as a way for it to improve the quality of urban life and attract new businesses.
is looking to use its waterfront as a way for it to improve the quality of urban life and attract
is looking at using its waterfront to improve the quality of urban life and attract
are looking to use their waterfronts to improve the quality of urban life and attract
are looking to use its waterfront as a way of improving the quality of urban life and attracting
are looking at using their waterfronts as a way of improving the quality of urban life and attract
well, strictly speaking, a waterfront is not a way of doing something; it's a physical frontage that is just sitting there next to the water. So, literally, that statement is nonsense.
More importantly, if you compare that choice against choice (C), you should notice that (C) is more concise and better worded.
(That's the way you should make all decisions about "wordiness""”they should be relative decisions, not absolute decisions.)
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