Even though her career was cut short when she was in her prime and the fifteen recordings she made were disappointing artistically as well as technically, Olive Fremstad (1871-1951) has never been entirely forgotten by opera aficionados.
though her career was cut short when she was in her prime and the fifteen recordings she made were
though her career was cut short while in her prime, with the fifteen recordings she made
as her career had been cut short when she was in her prime, with the fifteen recordings she had made
with her career having been cut short when she was in her prime, and the fifteen recordings she made were
with her career cut short while in her prime, and that the fifteen recordings she made were
原文的转折关系是合理的,应当保留。保留A和B,B选项改变了两件事情的并列关系 同时while引导的从句的省略是不正确的,从语法上省略了her career
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