The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records of their not paying back their loans on time, collectively known as the subprime lending market.
of their not paying back their loans on time,
of not paying back their loans on time, a group
of not paying back their loans on time, with such a group
that they do not pay back their loans on time,
that they do not pay back their loans on time, such a group
题目分析:
略。
选项分析:
A选项:首先,介词短语of their not paying back their loans是proven records的定语。但是其中第一个代词their是赘余的,records已经是borrowers的定语了,并且其身后已经说了是偿还“他们”的贷款;其次,collectively known as the subprime lending market是过去分词短语,其做定语具有就近修饰原则,先行词为loans。但在逻辑上,被认为是次贷市场的应是这些borroers。
B选项:Correct. 本选项在语法和逻辑上均是正确的。a group collectively known as the subprime lending market是borrowers的同位语。
C选项:Such在句中没有指代对象, 直接用a group作borrowers的同位语即可。
D选项:that they do not pay back their loans on time是records的同位语从句。这个同位语从句至少要用过去时,即,they did not pay back loans。另外,过去分词短语collectively known as the subprime lending market修饰错误同选项(A)。
E选项:同位语从句错误同选项(D);such错误同选项(C)。
DE错在that使用,如果 that 修饰records,后面的句子指代records主动要表达的动作或者内容。
原文 proven records 是想修饰 什么样的borrowers (they do not pay pack their loans on time) = records of these borrowers that they do not pay...
such 就是修饰a group 的,应该不是考点
with such a group 错在with,消失了主语
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