Although people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their death rates from heart disease are far lower in France.
people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their
people in France and the United States consume fatty foods at about the same rate, the
fatty foods are consumed by people in France at a comparable rate to the United States's, their
the rate of fatty foods consumed in France and the United States is about the same, the
the rate of people consuming fatty foods is about the same in France and the United States, the
题目分析:
略。
选项分析:
A选项:由于代词的指代原则是指代语境中数一致且合理的名词,所以本选项中最后出现的代词their指代其身前的people in France。但是,在逻辑上,people in France无法具有are far lower in France这个状态。
B选项:Correct. 本选项在语法和逻辑上均是正确的。
C选项:代词their错误同(A)。
D选项:rate的of型所有格中(做rate的定语)的核心词是fatty foods(consumed in France and the United States是过去分词短语)。在逻辑上,具有相同比率的应该是两个国家人消耗食物这件事情,而不是食物本身拥有比率(食物自己没法有比率)。另外,通常,the rate of food指代的是“食物的价格”。本选项在语意上显然不是“食物的价格在美国法国相同”。
E选项:同(D)里,本选项中of型所有格中的核心词是people(consuming fatty foods是现在分词短语)。逻辑上具有相同比率的也不能是人本身。
① 比较的平行:A中的people和US进行比较不对。
② 代词:their的指代不清
③ 所有格:C中的the US's无法还原
④ 句意:D中的rate of foods,E中的rate of people句意都不对,应该是rate at which ....
A:A comparable to B要平行
D:Ron大神的解释如下: a rate of fatty foods consumed可能的解释有如下两种,但是任何一种都不符合原意: 1、a rate is consumed. 即被吃掉的比率,显然不对 2、被消费掉的fatty foods有一个自己的比率,也不对。 如果一定要用被动,应该变成a rate at which are consumed,这样才能正确表达原意
D选项:rate的of型所有格中(做rate的定语)的核心词是fatty foods(consumed in France and the United States是过去分词短语)。在逻辑上,具有相同比率的应该是两个国家人消耗食物这件事情,而不是食物本身拥有比率(食物自己没法有比率)。另外,通常,the rate of food指代的是“食物的价格”。本选项在语意上显然不是“食物的价格在美国法国相同”。
E选项:同(D)里,本选项中of型所有格中的核心词是people(consuming fatty foods是现在分词短语)。逻辑上具有相同比率的也不能是人本身。
A. rate和US比较,比较对象不对等; their为完全指代,故their指代people in France, 代入句中即death rates of people in France…are far lower in France,语义重复
B. Correct
C. Their指代People in France错误;被动的使用awkward; the United States's后面的省略无法还原,比较对象不明确
D. [the rate of fatty foods consumed(×)改为the rates of consuming fatty food] in France and(+in) the United States [is(×)] about the same, the ……
the rate of fatty foods错,不是foods的rate,而应该是s的rate;
consumed in France and the United States错误,应该在the United States前加in, 同时主语rate应改为rates,且谓语动词改为are
E. [the rate of people(×)改为the rate of consumption] consuming fatty foods [is(×)] about the same in France and (+in)the United States, the
the rate of people错误,不是people的rate,应该是the rate of consumption;
同时rate应改为rates,且谓语动词改为复数,在the United States前加in
Although people in France and the United States consume fatty foods at about the same rate, the death rates from heart disease are far lower in France.
尽管法国和美国的人们食用高脂肪食物的比率大致相同,但法国的心脏病死亡率要低得多。
这道题语义很重要
D. the rate of fatty foods consumed指的是被吃掉的食物占所有食物的比例
E. the rate of people consuming fatty foods是吃fatty food的人站所有人口的比例
而实际的意思应该是两国消耗fatty food的速率
rate AT WHICH fatty foods are consumed
rate of food (xxxx) 和 rate of people (xxxx) 都不对 食物和人本身不能有比率
although不需要什么前后平行
D的核心词都能分析出来,见到ing又搞不清了! DE情况一样,核心词一个是food一个是people
"A 比较对象错,比较的是rate和US ,而不是france和us;their带出的是people in france与后边in france重复
B 正确
C rate有两个修饰,rate和US‘s比较’,错误;their错
D rate of food错。这个主语不可以consumed
E rate of people错。这个主语不可以consuming"
rate的of型所有格中(做rate的定语)的核心词是fatty foods(consumed in France and the United States是过去分词短语)。在逻辑上,具有相同比率的应该是两个国家人消耗食物这件事情,而不是食物本身拥有比率(食物自己没法有比率)。另外,通常,the rate of food指代的是“食物的价格”。本选项在语意上显然不是“食物的价格在美国法国相同
代词their指代其身前的people in France。但是,在逻辑上,people in France无法具有are far lower in France这个状态。
在逻辑上,具有相同比率的应该是两个国家人消耗食物这件事情,而不是食物本身拥有比率(食物自己没法有比率)。另外,通常,the rate of food指代的是“食物的价格”。本选项在语意上显然不是“食物的价格在美国法国相同”。
the rate of food
the rate of people 有误
D,the rate of fatty food consumed…可以指脂肪食物自己有一个rate,也可以指是这个rate被consumed了,应该用the rate at which fatty foods consumed…
D相比B去掉了consumed的动作主体people,主体明晰是更好的,比如the rate of fatty foods consumed in France没有说是consumed by people,那被食肉动物消耗的fatty food也可以算进去咯?
E,the rate of people consuming fatty foods,核心是名词people,即people‘s rate,如果要让动作做核心,改成the rate of people's consuming fatty foods
the rate of fatty foods 的核心词语是 fatty food meaning有误
rate of fatty food consumed 不对
错选a
考察:语意;代词(their)指代问题;
错误原因:句子没有把未画线部分连贯起来理解,尤其是未画线的后半部分;
a中连贯起来理解时their(people in France)death rates are far lower in France这个意思,然而不符合逻辑
b虽然稍稍比a说起来复杂赘余一些,但是它是正确的!(所以也不要都根据经验选择)
DE。在逻辑上,具有相同比率的应该是两个国家人消耗食物这件事情,而不是食物本身拥有比率(食物自己没法有比率)。
主动 > 被动 > ing
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choice (e) inadvertently states that "the rate of people" is consuming fatty foods. that doesn't make any sense.
everyone laughed at me accidentally walking into the girls' bathroom --> WRONG. sorry. this sentence would actually mean that everyone laughed at me as they were walking into the girls' bathroom.
everyone laughed at my accidentally walking into the girls' bathroom --> CORRECT