The Industrial Revolution, making it possible to mass-produce manufactured goods, was marked by their use of new machines, new energy sources, and new basic materials.
making it possible to mass-produce manufactured goods, was marked by their use of
making possible the mass production of manufactured goods, marked by the use of
which made it possible that manufactured goods were mass-produced, was marked by their using
which made possible the mass production of manufactured goods, was marked by the use of
which made the mass production of manufactured goods possible and was marked by using
2.修饰词。making和which。making是伴随状语,但是这里的插入语应该是修饰主语的,应该用定语。AB错
3.代词指代,AC的their和it都有指代不明的嫌疑,AC相对不优
4.措辞,by using是肯定错的,还不如by their using,E错
tips:make sth. adj结构中如果sth.过长,可以宾语导致:make adj. sth.。
2 .make sth. adj结构中如果sth.过长,可以宾语导致:make adj. sth.。
C to do 不是that their无指代
B marked主动错
A their无指代
我觉得有,但是后半句的their指代不明
嗯嗯我知道A是their的问题,就是不知道那个make it possible to 有木有问题~
感觉it应该是形式宾语吧,实际上是to do那部分内容?
有啊,make it adj to do sth,A那个是to do sth登录 或 注册 后可以参加讨论
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b中中间部分做伴随状语伴随mark这个动词,逻辑意思不对,而且缺少谓语动词,应该在mark前面加was
再看e 中这个and连词连接了一个定语从句和主句,明显不对!。